寫作園地 回復(fù)電子郵件寫作 [感悟范文] 假定你是中學(xué)生李華，在一位名叫TigerMom的學(xué)生家長的博客上看到如下內(nèi)容。請你根據(jù)博客內(nèi)容、寫作要點和要求，給這位家長回復(fù)。 Im the mother of a fourteenyearold girl. I have a rule for my daughter: be among the top 5 students or get punished in one way or another. She has been doing very well in school, but some friends of mine keep telling me that I put too much pressure on her. Am I wrong? 寫作要點：1.表明自己的看法；2.陳述自己的理由(可舉例說明)；3.提出至少兩條建議。 要求：詞數(shù)不少于120。 參考詞匯：評價evaluate [范文] Hi, TigerMom， What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in China. ①My idea is that it is not quite right for you to do so. ②Although high grades play an important part in evaluating students and their future university admission, yet development in emotion, health, and life attitude should never be ignored. ③There are many examples around us. ④Some allA students in school have turned out not to be so successful in society as expected. ⑤The reason is often that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities. ⑥In addition, punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow up mentally and physically. ⑦So I suggest that you take your friends advice. ⑧More importantly, let her live like a lovely girl; let her have more friends and social activities as we teenagers often do. ⑨I hope you will change your mind and things will go smoothly. Yours， Li Hua [技法討論] 本模塊要求回復(fù)一封電子郵件，回復(fù)電子郵件是書信的一種格式，其目的是解答有關(guān)組織或個人提出或出現(xiàn)的問題。其他像回帖、對于博客內(nèi)容的回復(fù)，版主對于留言的回復(fù)，本質(zhì)上類似于回復(fù)電子郵件，高考也經(jīng)常會考到。如：2009年陜西的回帖、2009年湖北的回一封電子郵件、2009年重慶的發(fā)送一封電子郵件、2010年山東和陜西2011年天津的寫一封電子郵件、2011年陜西的回復(fù)博客。 電子郵件的寫作步驟： 1．要有一個說明性的、合適的主題。其目的在于讓收信者快速地了解電子郵件的主要內(nèi)容。如：Life in Britain/Congratulations from Wang Hai等。 2．電子郵件正文的開頭部分必須呈現(xiàn)郵件的要點，然后再詳細介紹一些輔助性的內(nèi)容。作者必須根據(jù)被說明對象的特征，有序地列出寫作提綱。 3．要用簡練的語言。電子郵件的語言主要講究簡潔、真實、準確，如maybe，possible，most of等不確定的表達方法是不宜多用的，但可用一些具體的數(shù)目作輔助說明。特別是在一些商務(wù)性的電子郵件中，語言的正確性尤其重要。 黃金表達 1. 開頭常用句式： Im glad to hear from you... How nice it was to receive your email... It gives me a great pleasure to receive your kind letter of... Many thanks for your last letter. Im writing to ask if you can come next week. How time flies! Its three months since we last met. I have just received your email. I must apologize for not having written an email to you previously. 2. 結(jié)尾常用句式： Best wishes/regards to you. Waiting for your good news. Looking forward to your early reply. Hoping to hear from you soon. With best wishes to you. Please remember me to your whole family. Give my best regards (wishes) to your mother. Wish you a pleasant journey. Im expecting to hear from you as soon as possible. 亮點分析： 亮點一：①句中使用了that引導(dǎo)的表語從句，且從句中運用it作形式主語。 亮點二：②句中使用了讓步狀語從句，而且短語play an important part in和詞匯ignore的使用也很恰當。 亮點三：④句中so...as結(jié)構(gòu)的運用使得句子更加復(fù)雜得體。 亮點四：⑤句中使用了句式“The reason is that...”闡明了④句所講述的現(xiàn)象的原因。 亮點五：⑥句中連接副詞in addition和短語by no means的使用使作者的理由更加有力。 亮點六：⑧句中兩個祈使句的使用更能觸動TigerMom。 [類文演練] 假設(shè)你叫張明，你的美國網(wǎng)友Jane想了解你對上網(wǎng)的看法。請根據(jù)下面提供的信息，用英語給Jane發(fā)一封100詞左右的電子郵件。 1.能獲得更多的信息，可上網(wǎng)學(xué)習(xí)，使聯(lián)系更加方便。 2.可以聊天、玩游戲，但很浪費時間，網(wǎng)上有有害的內(nèi)容。 3.建議要學(xué)會利用網(wǎng)絡(luò)學(xué)習(xí)，時間應(yīng)有限制。 [聯(lián)想詞匯] 1. 上網(wǎng) ________________ 答案：on the Internet 2. 最新信息 ________________ 答案：the latest information 3. 保持聯(lián)系 ________________ 答案：keep in touch 4. 發(fā)送和接收電子郵件 ________________ 答案：send and receive emails [連詞成句] 1. They can get a great deal of ________________. 通過網(wǎng)絡(luò)他們能得大量新信息。 答案：the latest information through the Internet 2. ____________easy and convenient ____________. 跟朋友保持聯(lián)系更加方便容易。 答案：It is; to keep in touch with friends 3. Some students have spent too much time ________and ________. 一些學(xué)生花太多時間上網(wǎng)聊天玩游戲。 答案：chatting; playing games on the Internet [連句成章] __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 答案： Dear Jane， I would like to give you my opinion about being on the Internet. More and more middle school students here are starting using the Internet, through which they can get a great deal of the latest information. They can enjoy lessons given by the best teachers of netschools at home. And it is easy and convenient to keep in touch with friends by sending and receiving emails. On the other hand, some students have spent too much time chatting and playing games on the Internet. And there is something harmful to the students. At last, I suggest that students should make good use of the Internet for their studies and not be online for too long each time. Yours， Zhang Ming